wwing519 於 2009-09-29 07:03 PM 發表：

cm.`

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ieng046 於 2009-09-29 06:48 PM 發表：

sorry..
我將糖同蠟燭"勞"亂左...

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ieng046 於 2009-09-29 06:47 PM 發表：

I discover my phone is very bad

'coz the alarm&camera are broken down

我發現我部手機是十分壞?..
第二句入面點解會有are出現?

then...we go to beautiful good to buy candies
我諗美好前面應該加個the好似好d 話晒都專有名詞 又冇大寫..

yummy yummy!!!!
買完蠟燭好好味...

and 1:30 we go to school see the celebration
句型錯左 時間應該擺句尾 we go to school 你兩個動詞.第2個動詞前加to 或者v+ing(摘自穎2)


mike and sam singing
cindy and her friend dancing
既然系已經發生左ge事會+ing.. 就算你要用現在式 前面個是動詞係邊呢..

then...i go to by bus with gold fish...baby...joey
go to by bus.. 呢句.. 真系.. 小學都有教..

穎2講左果d我就唔寫了..
本人覺得呢d句子真系好怪..

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evilkiko 於 2009-09-29 06:20 PM 發表：

'coz i talking with baby everyday...every class

the class is not borning

無v.應該系talk


the class is not borning
串錯字..仲有吾應該gum寫
應該寫:i don't feel bored during the class

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evilkiko 於 2009-09-29 01:26 PM 發表：

and 1:30 we go to school see the celebration
0-0 2 v.
many sentence no S.

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ppkss123 於 2009-09-28 11:32 PM 發表：

雖然我英文唔係幾叻...但係我都睇得明小小...

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Grace37 於 2009-09-28 10:47 PM 發表：

yellow eight egg` >

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ian_118 於 2009-09-28 09:07 PM 發表：

you sure you just make a few mistakes?
= =

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