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| 2006 年 7 月 2 日 星期日 |
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My favourite food
What is your favourite food? Ice cream? I think it is not health. Candy? It’s too sweet.
My favourite food is cheese. It tastes sweet. It melts in your mouth slowly. You will feel you mouth is full of cheese. It’s fantastic. When you want to swallow it, some cheese will still stay in your mouth. Then you will try to swallow all cheese. It’s fun.
Cheese is a health food too. It can give you a strong body. Although cheese is sweet, it only has 0.2% candy. Everyone can eat cheese safely. Including shut-in. Doctor said that people should eat I cup of cheese everyday. It is clear that cheese is a good food. I enjoy eating cheese.
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| 刊登時間︰2006-07-02 08:16 PM [ 編輯日誌 ] [ 分享至FACEBOOK ] |
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SANDY.. 於 2006-07-03 04:08 PM 發表：
唉...
琴日寫左之後打漏左個"保安編碼"...
又要再打過...
=v=
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How can cheese be sweet!~?
You will feel your mouth is full of cheese.
When you want to swallow it, some cheese will still stay in your mouth. Then you will try to swallow all cheese.
>>STRANGE~! = ="
Cheese is a health food too. It can give you a strong body.
>>a little bit chinglish...
I would write>>Cheese is healthy too.
it only has 0.2% candy
candy...u mean"糖份"~?
I think using "sugar" is better...
& I want to say that...
candy is different from sugar~
Everyone can eat cheese safely.
u mean "healthily"~?
Including shut-in.
What do u mean?
Doctor said that people should eat I cup of cheese everyday.
I think using present tense is better~
It is clear that cheese is a good food.
>>CHINGLISH!
It is clear that cheese is a kind of healthy(not "good"!) food.
check up the word "good" from dictionary~
MARK:14/25
P.S.:Check the comp once again before u submit it!
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