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2007 年 3 月 29 日 星期四  |
| Creative Writing |
分類: 隨心之作 |
以下的文章是學校要我參加的English Festival 活動而要作的~ 請評價~ ^^
我們這一次有四個故事選擇,我們要選出其中一個來創作結局。 我則選了這個:
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首先是大會用作開頭的一段:
"Sunny's Toy Robot"
My friend, Sunny, is a lover of toy robots. Last Sunday, his mother took him to Stanley to visit his grandparents. On the way his mother had to get some money from the bank. Sunny found a small toy shop near the bank. He found a very special toy robot sitting in the corner of the shop window. It was just the size of his thumb. It had a pair of sparkling eyes which seemed to wink at Sunny.
Sunny entered the toy shop and asked the shopkeeper, “How much is that toy robot in the corner of the shop window?”
“It’s not for sale, I’m afraid,” the shopkeeper replied.
“Oh, could you please sell it to me? I love collecting toy robots and I’ve never seen one like this.” Sunny begged.
The shopkeeper thought for a moment and whispered, “Well then, I’ll sell it to you for thirty dollars. But you must promise me you won’t tell anyone that you bought it here.”
“Don’t worry. I promise I won’t tell anyone.” Sunny replied eagerly.
Happily Sunny put the toy robot in his bag and left the toy shop. But as soon as he stepped out of the shop, he heard a tiny voice, “Where are we going?”
Sunny looked everywhere for the owner of the voice but he could find nobody around him.
Then the voice continued, “I am the toy robot you just bought. Now that you are my master, what do you want me to do for you?”……
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接着是我自己作的new ending:
Sunny was shocked. He looked into his bag and saw the little toy robot moving around. He was so scared that he picked it out of his bag and threw it on to the floor. Then, he ran away to the bank as fast as he could to find his mum, even though he is a lover of toy robots.
When he arrived at the bank, he calmed down, and thought that he was only too tired so he had some kind of daydream. He went to visit his grandparents after his mum has finished getting some money, they had a good afternoon. Then, they went home.
Sunny was very tired when he got back home, so he had a bath and planned to go to bed. Just when he went back to his room, he saw the little toy robot sitting on his desk. It said, “Master, what do you want me to do for you?” “How did you get in here?” Sunny asked. “I followed you all the way! But you didn’t notice me because I am too small.” It explained.
“Okay, then…” Sunny suddenly remembered that he still has not finished his big pile of homework that he has to hand in tomorrow! “Can you help me finish my homework?” “Yes, master.” So, Sunny fell on his bed and slept.
The next morning, even though Sunny knew it, he was still surprised that all his homework was done correctly and laid on his desk. He packed them all in his school bag and went to school.
After handing in his homework, he went back to his seat and read a comic. Suddenly, “Sunny! Please come out.” His teacher, Miss Chan said. “Sunny, you don’t write like this, who helped you do your homework?” “Er… the toy robot……” Just after he finished saying the last word, the whole class laughed. Sunny felt that his face was burning, and……
“Sunny, Sunny! It’s time to wake up! We have to get off the bus!” Mum shouted. Sunny woke up, and there was no toy robot to be seen! “Oh, it was only a dream…” He thought.
He had a good time at his grandparents’.
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你們認為我作得好嗎?
不論是路過的,還是無聊來看看的, 也歡迎評價~
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