魔鬼老師

我這個日日都聽你書咖乖仔回下你先啦

其實我無點抄過功課咖

唔好聽某一些二五仔妖言啦

我咩都get都咖

都係明白你個分心意啊

好多謝你咁鼓勵我地學英文

其實你下年可以唔走留低嗎

最多做番一百分功課比你啦下

講起學習應有的態度

我常不理你啊

每當你講這些野就放蚊了

補番堆英文比你

ghost teacher:
l an a brilliant boy that listen of your guidance every day
Let me say something first to you
First,i want to say that my homework is done by myself
Don't listen to some traitor's evil fallacies
Next,i get all the thing you give me
i also understand you have really given much thought to me
Thank for you encourage our to study English
In fact,can you don't leave our alone?
i will do 100homework by myself
Fianlly,i will say about studying's attitude
i never listen it by you
If you say this thing,i will want to sleep
DO you like this compostion?
I hope you'll like it
THX for you guidance.
By your brilliant student

Help me proofread it PLX!