作左好耐架喇
不過都係唔係好作得 只有4段 .__.''
同埋作得唔係好 第一次作MA (好像是 即使不是都只是第二次)
冇咩rhyme 但又好似幾順口^^
我覺得都是個好開始喇 ^_______________________________________________________^""'''''''(事實上很差)
沒有找人幫手改 可能有錯 不過有錯的我都盡量改了
《YOURS》 Type;fancy
Your face is a silver moon , shining bright at the night
Attracted by your charming eyes , sometime makes me a little shy.
Your mind is the thickest fog , permeated through my thought
Think about for a long time , but still confuses my mind.
Your words are first dawn chorus , wakes me up Sunday and follow
Tender me go through every day's difficult , but how rare is it that i can only suppose
And
Your love is a gathered storm , i chase across the sky
No much how hard i try , you still far form my life....
14-8-08 13:00 BY Pan
如果我再諗到既 就可以再加上去 很自由的喔
其實想到很多 但就是寫不出 真難 Orz ''''''
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