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2007 年 10 月 1 日  星期一   晴天


happy day 愉快

We don't need to go to school today,so i think that you will have a happy day just like me !           

Although, i can't go to outside for playing , but  i am still happy.It is because my best friend not only come here to visit my diary , but also reminds my mistakes ! Therefore , i am happy that i have this firend . In fact , i write this diary in order to improve my english standard . therefore , if you  find that  i have any mistakes , you can remind me please !I believe that i will improve my english quickly if i have your help!

That's all i want to say , thank you!






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tree 於 2007-10-02 11:57 PM 發表:
haha....how do you feel about your dairy now? do you satisfied? do you feel hard on it or have found some interests from it?

{We don't "need to" go to school today,so i think that you will have "a"(MUST ADD AN ARTICLE HERE) happy day "just like" me ! Although, i can't go "to"( SHOULD BE DELETED) outside "for"playing , but i am still happy.It is because my best firend not only come here to visit my diary , but "also" reminds my "mistakes" ! Therefore , i am happy that i have this firend . In fact , i write this diary in order to improve my english. therefore , if you find that i have any mistakes , you "can" remind me please!I believe "that"i will improve my english quickly "if" i have your helps!

That's all i want to say , thank you!}

Note: i want to remind you that you must use the pass tense in your diary as all the things was in the past. Remember!!! i found that you already have improvement in your writing today...add oil!
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ok , i will  try one's best !!
Posted at 2007-10-03 10:15 PM   [ 編輯 ] [ 刪除 ]



kwan 於 2007-10-02 10:29 PM 發表:
看來你既英文進步了許多喔,,
要繼續加油,,.不要放棄喔.,.^.^
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no.....
i just improve less,but i should thank your support!!
 
Posted at 2007-10-02 11:16 PM   [ 編輯 ] [ 刪除 ]



ping0210 於 2007-10-02 08:49 PM 發表:
haha*+oil唷‵‵∩w∩
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ha.....
you are really so nice , you come here but you just say oil唷
therefore , i also thank you come here.
Posted at 2007-10-02 09:52 PM   [ 編輯 ] [ 刪除 ]



ka 於 2007-10-01 09:33 PM 發表:
ha...it is crucial that you should improve your english...

but don't forget other subject

Try you best@@ ..you will success ̄︶ ̄

also...i want to watch VCD "德州電鑽xxx" i forgot the name- -"

If you have a time...will you accompany yo watch it@@?
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Ok , i have less afraid , but i will watch it with you .
If you have time to outside playing , you may remember call me!
thank you come here.
Posted at 2007-10-02 09:43 PM   [ 編輯 ] [ 刪除 ]


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