I have a one minute presentation about my hobbies on the following week~

and i'm not sure of my script is good or not...

i want all of u can help me find out my mistakes~(including grammer mistakes)

pls help me to write the best script ^^

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Here is my ugly script...

Good morning everyone.

Today,i'm going to share my hobbies with all of u~

I think most of you know what is my favourite hobby.

My favourite outdoor hobby is playing volleyball.

I think playing volleyball is exciting and it's good for our health.

Playing volleyball also make me become more musculine and powerful.

And it also improve my high jump skills , speeding up , etc...

I feel great when i'm playing volleyball.

Besides, i like lisetening to musicevery time and everywhere.

Espeacially Lady Gaga's and Justin Bieber's songs.

Although the lines may not be very meanningful ,the melody are rhythmical.

I love Lady Gaga's Telephone and Justin Bieber's Love Me the most because i thought they are vigor enough.

And my favourite line is "and i cannot test you with a drink in my hand, EH "

And this is the end of my sharing ,thank you~

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p.s i had counted that is enough for one minute~