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2009 年 10 月 10 日 星期六  |
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Today is13 October 2009
In the morning,I had bread for my breakfast.
Then,My MUM and I went to see the doctor.There are ONE woman who make some trouble unresonable.I really want to shouted her. ( \ /\ / )
After that,I went to salon,Gray, a young hairdresser,who service me.^^
My terrible explaining skill, but he still explain politely.
He asked me many questions constanly to understaning my require .
Next, I were shopping with my MUM.
At 2:00p.m. ,I watched film (500 days of Summer) with my sister in Mong Kok
It is a good and simple film. And its sences and background is good.For example,its background music is softly. To conclusion, It is confortable and fluency.
At night, I ate new restaurant with my family. The taste of food is quite good and the price is reasonable.
The drinks can take many times.It is mixed with italian and janpaness food.
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Someone who wants to help you 於 2009-10-11 03:03 AM 發表：
I just want to help you
Today is13 October 2009
In the morning,I had bread for my breakfast.
Then,My MUM and I went to see the doctor.There are ONE woman who make some trouble unresonable.I really want to shouted her. ( \ /\ / )
Then,My MUM and I went to see the doctor.There are ONE woman who makes some troubles unresonable.I really want to shout her. ( \ /\ / )(總數用s 第3身單數用s)
After that,I went to salon,Gray, a young hairdresser,who service me.^^
After that,I went to salon,Gray, a young hairdresser,who serviced me.^^(過去左既用過式)
My terrible explaining skill, but he still explain politely.
He asked me many questions constanly to understaning my require .
He asked me many questions constanly(wrong spelling) for my requirements .(串錯字 用埋require係一個v my之後要跟一個n)
Next, I were shopping with my MUM.
Next, I was shopping with my MUM.(I 係用was)
At 2:00p.m. ,I watched film (500 days of Summer) with my sister in Mong Kok
It is a good and simple film. And its sences and background is good.For example,its background music is softly. To conclusion, It is
It is a good and simple film. And its sences and background is good.For example,its background music is soft. To conclusion, It is
(ad係用呢修飾v 而你呢度係想修飾個background music 但呢個係n 所以你要用一個adj去飾佢)
confortable and fluency.(用得and 兩邊既野就要對等 你原本係一個adj一個n 咁係唔得的)
confortable and fluent.
At night, I ate new restaurant with my family. The taste of food is quite good and the price is reasonable..(港式英文...請留意 你唔可以食一間餐廳 你係想話係一間新既餐廳度食飯吧)
I had dinner with my family in a new restaurant.
The drinks can take many times.It is mixed with italian and janpaness food.(你係唔係想話d野飲可以飲完再拎? 係既可以好似我咁寫0)
We can refill the drinks because it does not have any rule to ban it.
文法底子唔係咁好 小五小六既練習可以幫到你 請加油學好英文 你仍有好大既進步空間
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Someone who want to help you=] 於 2009-10-11 02:59 AM 發表：
I just want to help you
Today is13 October 2009
In the morning,I had bread for my breakfast.
Then,My MUM and I went to see the doctor.There are ONE woman who make some trouble unresonable.I really want to shouted her. ( \ /\ / )
Then,My MUM and I went to see the doctor.There are ONE woman who makes some troubles unresonable.I really want to shout her. ( \ /\ / )(總數用s 第3身單數用s)
After that,I went to salon,Gray, a young hairdresser,who service me.^^
After that,I went to salon,Gray, a young hairdresser,who serviced me.^^(過去左既用過式)
My terrible explaining skill, but he still explain politely.
He asked me many questions constanly to understaning my require .
He asked me many questions constanly(wrong spelling) for my requirements .(串錯字 用埋require係一個v my之後要跟一個n)
Next, I were shopping with my MUM.
Next, I was shopping with my MUM.(I 係用was)
At 2:00p.m. ,I watched film (500 days of Summer) with my sister in Mong Kok
It is a good and simple film. And its sences and background is good.For example,its background music is softly. To conclusion, It is
It is a good and simple film. And its sences and background is good.For example,its background music is soft. To conclusion, It is
(ad係用呢修飾v 而你呢度係想修飾個background music 但呢個係n 所以你要用一個adj去飾佢)
confortable and fluency.(用得and 兩邊既野就要對等 你原本係一個adj一個n 咁係唔得的)
confortable and fluent.
At night, I ate new restaurant with my family. The taste of food is quite good and the price is reasonable..(港式英文...請留意 你唔可以食一間餐廳 你係想話係一間新既餐廳度食飯吧)
I had dinner with my family in a new restaurant.
The drinks can take many times.It is mixed with italian and janpaness food.(你係唔係想話d野飲可以飲完再拎? 係既可以好似我咁寫0)
We can refill the drinks because it does not have any rule to ban it.
文法底子唔係咁好 小五小六既練習可以幫到你 請加油學好英文 你仍有好大既進步空間
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