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  2008 年 7 月 29 日  星期二 【颱風】  
  2008-07-29

闲来没事

把《再别康桥》拿来翻译了一下

虽然手法很笨拙

但是我的处女作哦。。支持一下

 Goodbye Cambridge

quietly,i leave away

as i came here quietly

i waved and say goodbye to  the clouds.

 

the golden willow of the river band

is a bride in the sunset

its lovely shadow ih the sparkling waves

surging in my heart.

 

the glossy grass on the mud

is dancing  inthe water

i would like to be a waterweed

in the  tenderness of cambridge .

 

beneath the a tree,a pond

oh,no  but a rainbow over the sky

then spreading among the weeds

 down came the dreams of seven colors.

 

dreams?

searching it into yhe reedy marsh

carrying a  boat full of  little twinkles

and singing in the star light

oh ~

but i just can't sing

for the silence is the violin for being apart

being quiet  as the summer bugs

cambridge is in her silence tonight

 

quietly  i leave away

as i came here quietly

waving my sleeves

and with nothing taken away.

 

我觉得第一段和最后一段特别的郁闷

很难翻译

迫于单词量过少的无奈,

只能是这个水平了。


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vivi 於 2008-09-29 11:19 AM 發表:
haha翻译得不错呀
for the silence is the violin for being apart

being quiet as the summer bugs

cambridge is in her silence tonight
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Syusuke 於 2008-09-26 05:24 PM 發表:
没想到SMILE还有这种闲情~
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Syusuke 於 2008-09-26 05:22 PM 發表:
没想到SMILE还有这种闲情~
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