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2009 年 7 月 9 日 星期四  |
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I WAS GO TO THE CAMP ALREDY LA!!!I THINK THAT THE CAMP IS VERY GOOD CAMP BRCUASE THE CAMP HAVE A LOT OF KIND OF THINGS TO GIVE THE PEOPLE TO VISIT OR PLAY OF IT!!
THE CAMP HAVE A LOT OF FREE TIME TO GIVE WE TO PLAY ABOUT THE CAMP!!WE ALSO GO TO CYCLI OR PLAY THE TABLE TENNIS AND BADMINTENTOO!!!
THIS CAMP CAN HELP ME TO KNOW A LOT OF THINGS ABOUT ME OR MY FRIENDS LIFT!!!THIS CAMP CAN HELP ME TO THINK ABOUT I HAVE TO DO WHAT AFTER THAT!!!THIS CAMP CAN HELP US TO PLAY HAPPILY AND VERY FRIEND!!!THE PEOPLE IS VERY FRIENDLY!!AR TED IS VERY FUNNY!!THEY ALL IS SLEEP VERY EARLY!!!SO,I HAVE TO PLAY VERY CAREFULLY BUCAUSE WE HAVE TO HELP THEM TO SLEEP BEFORE THE SUN IS GO UP!!!+.+
FINALLY,I THINK THIS IS A GOOD CAMP AR!!!I THINK I WILL GO WHEN I'M F.2 AR!!!
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jessie 於 2009-07-15 11:08 PM 發表：
... 'TO GIVE WE TO PLAY ' 應該轉為 ' TO give us to play '
...'ABOUT ME OR MY FRIENDS '應該轉為 ' about myself and my friends'
重有呀 ,要用 past tense 呀 - -
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你D英文咁鬼勁★； 但D大楷睇到眼都花★； C0mment★；
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