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2007 年 8 月 12 日  星期日 晴天
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One day, i watched the RTHK programme which was about new borns drink their mother milk instead of milk powder. According to the research, those babies drink their mother milk will  healthier and cleverer than those do not.I belive in this results, as i find some examples to support my idea such as apple. She is the excellent sample in this event who need not hardworking but can get a A in CLC.

Also, i found that those repeaters who are supported by their family can have a higher chance to success. Few months ago, i had quite confidence to get a progress next year. But now, i feel annoyed, dispressed,distrusted and frustrated. It seems the end of the world. All things like time, weather, people are changing but except me.

I know only hardworking is not enough to get the success. I have my clearly mind and target, i also have energy and time to fight this game. But i know what i do not have is my family support. Therefore, i will eventually to be a loser.

I hate this home, i hate my mum. How can't she just give me some power to endure this difficulty. Why she only ask me to rely on myself on the side of financial but do nothing to help me? Enough is enough. I have not been asking u a one dollar since this A-level school term. But u always murmur at me how i did not listen u~! Aren't u have ur eyes, i do the housework once i am free. I never say 'no' to u if i have any excuse. Why just u only complain me but not apprecaite me~! How can u just have ur rule that What u think and ask me to do is a must. I know it is a must but can u stand at my side and think for me? I am not ur 出氣公仔∼! And i hate wt u said is 整定∼!!! I totally beleive that ur master is not a fortune teller but a gossip fucker! How can u just trust her but not me? Why dont u live with her and ask me run away, I really appreciate if u say that. I hate u talking on the phone with fucker and point at me. What u stupid mum, i hate u.

 

 

Proofread by J.... ^^  錯到狗彩 完全想死 唔該哂你a

Hey J... could u mind answering my questions in pink

One day, i watched the RTHK programme which was about new borns drinking*("was" is the main verb in this sentence; if "drink"---> two main verbs which is wrong) their mother milk instead of milk powder. According to the research, those babies who drink/drinking* their mother milk will be* healthier and cleverer than those do not.I believe* in this results#(either "these results" or"this result" as i find some examples to support my idea such as apple. She is an* excellent sample in this event who need not be*("hardworking" is an adj and "need" here is a modal verb; so add "be")hardworking but can get an* A in CLC.

Also, i found that those repeaters who are supported by their families* can have a greater*(or higher probabilty) chance to succeed*(verb is used here). Few months ago, i had *(or 'was quite confident" confidence to get a progress next year. But now, i feel annoyed, dispressed,distrusted and frustrated. It seems the end of the world. Everything* like time, weather and* people are changing but*(either but or except)me.

I know only been* hardworking(adj) is not enough to get the success.(點用been e句, 冇have or had 亦okay??) I have a clear*(clearly is an adverb which cannot descirbe a noun)mind and target, i also have energy and time to fight*(點解delete 左我d字~?較簡潔~?). But i know what i do not have is my family support. Therefore, i will eventually to be a loser.

I hate this home, i hate my mum. How can't she just give me some power to endure this difficulty. Why did* she only ask me to rely on myself financially*but do nothing to help me? Enough is enough. I have not been asking one dollar from u * since the start/end#(i think "term" refers to a duration. if u use 'since', u need to indicate a specific pt of time) A-level school term. But u always murmur at me.How did I *(inversion is needed here)not listen to* u~! Don't*(both "are" and "have" are verbs; so use one only) u have ur eyes, i do the housework whenever* i am free. I never say 'no' to u if i have any excuse#(don't really understand tim...)我有籍口都唔say no. Why do*(remember the structure of a question ne!! okok la 收到) u just/only*(i think they have same meaning here) complain about* me but not appreciate打錯字jar~不過真係錯左* me~! How can u just have ur rule that What u think and ask me to do is a must. I know it is a must but can u stand at my side and think for me? I am not ur 出氣公仔∼! And i hate wt u said is 整定∼!!! I totally believe* that ur master is not a fortune teller but a gossip fucker! How can u just trust her but not me? Why dont u live with her and ask me to* run away, I really appreciate if u say that. I hate u talking on the phone with fucker and point at me. What a* stupid mum, i hate u.

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Jxxx 於 2007-08-15 07:29 PM 發表:
1.Oh, i typed it wrong. It should be " i know only being hardworking is not enough".
2.I am not sure but I think ppl only write "it's time to play/go for the game" ; ppl seldom write fight the game. It is a question of collocation(ie, combinations of work). eg, we say "play a role" but not "pretend a role"(扮演一個角色)
3.I don't say no even if I have excuses.
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J... 於 2007-08-13 04:21 PM 發表:
One day, i watched the RTHK programme which was about new borns drinking*("was" is the main verb in this sentence; if "drink"---> two main verbs which is wrong) their mother milk instead of milk powder. According to the research, those babies who drink/drinking* their mother milk will be* healthier and cleverer than those do not.I believe* in this results#(either "these results" or"this result" as i find some examples to support my idea such as apple. She is an* excellent sample in this event who need not be*("hardworking" is an adj and "need" here is a modal verb; so add "be")hardworking but can get an* A in CLC.

Also, i found that those repeaters who are supported by their families* can have a greater*(or higher probabilty) chance to succeed*(verb is used here). Few months ago, i had *(or 'was quite confident" confidence to get a progress next year. But now, i feel annoyed, dispressed,distrusted and frustrated. It seems the end of the world. Everything* like time, weather and* people are changing but*(either but or except)me.

I know only been* hardworking(adj) is not enough to get the success. I have a clear*(clearly is an adverb which cannot descirbe a noun)mind and target, i also have energy and time to fight*. But i know what i do not have is my family support. Therefore, i will eventually to be a loser.

I hate this home, i hate my mum. How can't she just give me some power to endure this difficulty. Why did* she only ask me to rely on myself financially*but do nothing to help me? Enough is enough. I have not been asking one dollar from u * since the start/end#(i think "term" refers to a duration. if u use 'since', u need to indicate a specific pt of time) A-level school term. But u always murmur at me.How did I *(inversion is needed here)not listen to* u~! Don't*(both "are" and "have" are verbs; so use one only) u have ur eyes, i do the housework whenever* i am free. I never say 'no' to u if i have any excuse#(don't really understand tim...). Why do*(remember the structure of a question ne!!) u just/only*(i think they have same meaning here) complain about* me but not appreciate* me~! How can u just have ur rule that What u think and ask me to do is a must. I know it is a must but can u stand at my side and think for me? I am not ur 出氣公仔∼! And i hate wt u said is 整定∼!!! I totally believe* that ur master is not a fortune teller but a gossip fucker! How can u just trust her but not me? Why dont u live with her and ask me to* run away, I really appreciate if u say that. I hate u talking on the phone with fucker and point at me. What a* stupid mum, i hate u.


Family support is important but a lack of it doesn't mean a must to failure. Have u heard of Dave Pelzer? He was nearly tortured to death becoz of her alcholic mother. He turned out to be a writer of the world's bestersellers and an Outstanding Young Person of the World.
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