I remember Mr yeung said,  'Early worms are eaten by birds.'

The adult always think they are right and empower to distinguish wt is right and wrong. They are seldom to think more for children or for the opposite sides. Perphas it is the habit by duplicating traditional but in my opinion its only an excuse of them to control others.

There are akways 2 sides in the reality. We cant say wt is absolutely right and the other is completely false. We would better change our mind and tone to express our feeling to others. This is wt we called ' multi-point' thinking.

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Adults*(it's the first time u mention'adults' and u are not referring a special group of ppl;so no 'the') always think they are right and empower to distinguish wt is right and wrong. They seldom *(grammatically correct but just a little weird here perhaps)think about* the children or for the opposite sides. Perhaps* it is the habit of* duplicating tradition*(not sure about the meaning of'duplicating tradition') but in my opinion it's* only an excuse of them to control others.#(better start a new sentence from 'but')

There are always* 2 sides in the reality. We can't* say wt is absolutely right or what *is completely false. We would better change our mind and tone to express our feeling to others. This is wt we called ' multi-point' thinking.