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Last few days, my boss had a trip to indonesia. In order to work properly, Miss Carol accompanied me in Fanling office. To be honest, I was really glad that working work*(must use a phase containing with a verb after "that") with her again. At the beginning, i was*(took its so easy )我想講我以為好容易to handle as those days were weekdays*. However, we were so busy to serve customers, not only through phone calls but also walk walking*(the whole sentence is"through walking in"so after "through" use gerund or noun) 我想問walk 不是 noun ?? 這裡不可用ma? in. How come once my boss had gone, all customers fushed flooded*用flushed into 會不會好點??in. Moreover, the worst was all troublesome clients expressing their unsatisfied dissatisfied (there is no "unsatisfied") stuffs#(i think it's not very proper to say "dissatisfied stuffs")用sadness 會好點ma?stuffs to me. I had been scolded by them 3 times a day which broke my record. Being scolded is painful and surely i was really anger angry****(anger is a noun and angry is the adj). After that, i will think is it my fault or can i make it better to deal with these stuffs? Nevertheless, i do believe such these (either such ot these�嶂� here)stuffs will enhance increase*(we usually use enhance only when referring to skills) my pressure which let makes*點解加s?? stuffs 係noun 應該唔洗加 ~對不? me feel uncomfortable. Also, i had a headache today caused by this stress. i know what is no pay, no gain and i know what is the meaning of 'job' working*. It is something that you have no choice to choose *("to choose" is not necessary)and may be forced to do that no one care that you are willing to do or not.and may need to do sth whether you are willing or not.#(is that what u mean?) yap thank you..好彩你識睇..想死... When someone cares about your situation, you should be very glad. It's what my boss does, so i wanna say thank you to her. Working with Miss Carol is fantastic and wonderful, i can say that there is none no* 點解唔用得 none? miserable feeling. In fact, when she is in a bad mood, i am so scared, worried and quite quiet. It's better not to say anything than ask her whether she is okay or not. On the other hand, if she is in a good mood, she likes is like*("like" here is an adj and so add"is") a bird always grumbling and finding out your mistakes and then 'spell' at you. I like to be spelled rather ignored by her, as i know how happy is she she is*(it's not a question here and so put subj before a verb) and it's a signal meaning everthing is okay. All in all, she is a good partner but not me but I am not*.CAn i use i ain't. I always make her in a trouble actually..She always says she* (there is a hidden "that" after "says"; so start a new phase containing a subject,ie she)wanna kill me as well. By the way, Thank you very much for giving me a memorable memory and i'm so sorry that I *the same, start a new phase with a subject "I" after that)make you in a anger*anger(uncountable. no "a")..sorry....
Thank you very much a Jess, u are only the one proofreading detailed articles to me. I will work harder for ur great support!! Yap, i gained a lot in this job. Not only experiences, but also relationships with my boss and working partners. ^+++^
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jess 於 2007-09-08 10:16 AM 發表：
1. i thought it was easy to handle
2.not sure about "walk"... 3.i think both flush and flood are ok 4.it is the best if "XXX stuffs" is replaced by dissatisfaction 5.i seldom see ppl write"there's none sth" 6. yes, u can use ain't but it is old-fashioned ahh...extrememly tired!!!!i needa start revising. ppl around me are all crazy... they drive me nuts... |
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Jxxx 於 2007-09-02 09:57 AM 發表：
Last few days, my boss had a trip to indonesia. In order to work properly, Miss Carol accompanied me in Fanling office. To be honest, I was really glad that I could work*(must use a phase containing with a verb after "that") with her again. At the beginning, it was* so easy to handle as those days were weekdays*. However, we were busy to serve customers, not only through phone calls but also walking*(the whole sentence is"through walking in"so after "through" use gerund or noun) in. How come once my boss had gone, all customers flooded* in. Moreover, the worst was all troublesome clients expressing their dissatisfied(there is no "unsatisfied") stuffs#(i think it's not very proper to say "dissatisfied stuffs") to me. I had been scolded by them 3 times a day which broke my record.
Being scolded is painful and surely i was really angry****(anger is a noun and angry is the adj). After that, i will think is it my fault or can i do better to deal with these stuffs? Nevertheless, i do believe such these**(either such ot these here) stuffs will increase*(we usually use enhance only when referring to skills)my pressure which makes* me feel uncomfortable. Also, i had a headache today caused by this stress. i know what is no pay, no gain and i know what is the meaning of working*. It is something that you have no choice*("to choose" is not necessary) and may need to do sth whether you are willing or not.#(is that what u mean?) When someone cares about your situation, you should be very glad. It's what my boss does, so i wanna say thank you to her. Working with Miss Carol is fantastic and wonderful, i can say that there is no* miserable feeling. In fact, when she is in a bad mood, i am so scared, worried and quiet(?). It's better not to say anything than asking her whether she is okay or not. On the other hand, if she is in a good mood, she is like*("like" here is an adj and so add"is") a bird always grumbling and finding out your mistakes and then 'spell' at you. I like to be spelled rather ignored by her, as i know how happy she is*(it's not a question here and so put subj before a verb)and it's a signal meaning everthing is okay. All in all, she is a good partner but I am not*. I always make her in a trouble actually..She always says she* (there is a hidden "that" after "says"; so start a new phase containing a subject,ie she)wanna kill me as well. By the way, Thank you very much for giving me a memorable memory and i'm so sorry that I *the same, start a new phase with a subject "I" after that)make you in *anger(uncountable. no "a").sorry.... !!!!!!!!First and foremost,,,,,, congratzzz!!!!!!!!!!! You have really improved=] yayayay, happy for u. Tough experience makes u stronger. I am sure u have gained a lot from this job, haven't u? |
