On 24th December, this day is Christmas Eve (或者全句只寫 'On Christmas Eve' 就行). I and family went to a restaurant  in Tsim Sha Tsui to have our Christmas dinner. In the restaurant, there were a lot of people. Fortunately, we had made a reservation, otherwise we would have waited (假設用would) for a long time.After the dinner, we went to the Avenue of Stars to watch and admire the beautiful Christmas light (lamps and lanterns = 座檯燈和燈籠).

  On 25th December, my family and I went to Mongkok to buy a mobile phone for my brother. It was because my brother lost his mobile phone when he was playing  basketball one day (句子結構和先後次序問題).After that, I dated (dated my friend = 你約人；dated with my friend = 你和朋友一起約人) my friend together to buy presents for other friends, and then I went back home to watch (see 是看到，watch 是用心看) cartoon on my computer.

  On 26th December, it was boxing day, but I didn't have any present to open (/ unwrap) on that day. We just went to a restaurant eat lunch and then I stayed at home to study. It was because my mather didn't let me go outside to play, so I could only stay at home to study.

  In this Christmas vacation, I always to school for supplementary lessons; I could only have a few days to go out, so I hope I can play a lot more next year.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Trevor Chan