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2009 年 5 月 10 日  星期日   晴天


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Every protject ... the teammates  will have their own idea , this is very smiple thing ....

but I thought someone must be mix the idea  together -- > Leader

Someone say  : Leader has their own idea !

Yup , of course ,  person instead of human  By Wai  (* leader is just a human too *)  , I think leader and the teammate job is the same.

The difference is how can the leader mix the idea as good as he can.

The conclusion is :

1. If an idea identification by all people ,that to be equal  SUCK!

2.If a group can't united , that to be equal SUCK!

3.If you just use your own way to finish the project , that to be equal SUCK!

* If you not reply **replay** ,that to be equal SUCK! *

 

 

(PS: I will use the red colour to highlight the difficult words , and use yellow to highlight the important word , the mistake one will keep and use blue colur to remind myself everytime )

 




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nebula0248 於 2009-05-14 09:56 PM 發表:
Correction : The conclusions are
I don't know whether there is/are any mistake(s) anymore....
Just help you for a little bit! Keep going!
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nebula0248 於 2009-05-14 09:49 PM 發表:
Every protject ... the(no the) teammates  will(use 'usually' is better) have their own ideas , this is a very simple(not smiple, spelling mistake) thing ....
but I think(not 'thought', why pass tense?) there should be someone mix(use 'combine' is better) the ideas(if there is only one idea, you don't need to mix!)  together -- > Leader
Someone says  : Leader has their(it should be his/her, if you use their, you should use 'Leaders have') own ideas(i don't think there is only one idea) !
Yup , of course ,  person instead of human(???)  By Wai  (* leader is just a human too *)  , I think leader and the(no the) teammates' job are(not is) the same.
The difference is how can the leader mix(use 'combine' is better) the ideas(i don't think there is only one idea) as good as he can.
The conclusion are(not is, you can see there are so many points below!) :
1. If an idea identify(a great mistake, is is not identification, identification is a noun, we want a verb to describe, when you see some words end with -ication or -ization, this must be a noun, beware of this!) by all people ,that will be equal to SUCK!
2.If a group can't united , that will be equal to SUCK!
3.If you just use your own way to finish the project , that will be equal to SUCK!
* If you not reply **replay** ,that means you are SUCK! *
These mistakes are very common, beware of the 's', when you write your essay/passage, make sure that you can read the whole essay/passage fluently(流暢地), when you read/find some words that make the sentense strange, there is/are mistake(s) there usually. 
These mistakes are easy to correct and find, try your best in English and work harder!
If you have any questions, come and ask me, i'm welcome!
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lok0620 於 2009-05-14 06:04 PM 發表:
this is very smiple* thing
i think is simple*
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Solo 於 2009-05-13 08:14 PM 發表:
sorry..i can't read english..!
are you typing english..
so that means ,you can't read what you are typing?
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LKeong 於 2009-05-12 09:17 PM 發表:
``鬼佬blog嗎?'
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waki_wk 於 2009-05-12 08:01 PM 發表:
好多都睇唔明
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LovERaINy424 於 2009-05-11 09:54 PM 發表:
cm..!
sorry..i can't read english..!
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Wai 於 2009-05-11 09:44 PM 發表:
Not bad at all ,Fat=]
"leader is just a human too"
Maybe use person instead of human is better @@
Keep going =]
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kinnie 於 2009-05-11 09:37 PM 發表:
喂!!我支持你呀!!!我同你同年齡ga時候都冇你咁叻呀!!我會經常來的!!因為我都想學下英文!!!加油呀!!!
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GordonSolo 於 2009-05-11 08:24 PM 發表:
that to be equal SUCK!
ISN'T IT ' that is equal to suck?'
and .. in chinese it is ..
這不就等於爛 ?
maybe you should say..
that isn't a teamwork..
smiple is simple
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